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Old 14th December 1999, 11:29
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Cold was the winter day
Fallen leaves covered the ground
You quivered
Shy,the boy was I
We sat together almost still
I dare not look into your eyes
Without thought my hand went on your shoulder
I slowly leaned closer to you
I felt you shaking softly from my touch
Then without my body knowing it my lips touched yours
I thought it lasted forever
It felt so intense
Permanently etched in my memory as it were yesterday


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Old 4th January 2000, 14:55
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Lust is a powerfull thing. The passion of the first kiss is lust at it's best.
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Old 4th January 2000, 18:39
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Old 5th January 2000, 00:34
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Old 5th January 2000, 02:14
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Old 5th January 2000, 11:16
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Bravo. Great poetry. Makes me ponder what a kiss really is.

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Old 6th January 2000, 02:14
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When you are deeply in love, it is the joining of two souls. Splendor!
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