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Old 25th April 2003, 13:57
andrewblow andrewblow is offline
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Dear UaDetective

I read your post with interest - and then amusement. May I respectfully suggest that you obtain the services of a "Proof-reader" for your English language business communications. Your opening sentence should read something like -

UaDetective is <VERY> or <EXTREMELY> pleased to announce that it will be providing a new service <WITH IMMEDIATE EFFECT>

"Quite" suggests 'medium', not too bothered, etc.,..... and "since immediately" is a clash of tenses.

Nevertheless - best wishes,

Andrew - the English Knight

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